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chumdawg · 12-09-2008, 01:09 AM

I enjoyed your article. At times, though, it tended toward melodrama. And when you said that the Spurs' problems were "compacted," I don't think that is really the word you meant.

Other than that, pretty good effort!

12-09-2008, 01:09 AM	#6
chumdawg Guru Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Cowboys Country Posts: 23,336	I enjoyed your article. At times, though, it tended toward melodrama. And when you said that the Spurs' problems were "compacted," I don't think that is really the word you meant. Other than that, pretty good effort!