Friend asking for some feedback

[alby]

Personally, I feel like it's not the greatest of videos but my friend really wanted some help and advice. To be honest with you, I am not the best person to ask haha.

I figured that there are a lot of talented and creative people who post on this message board so I wanted to see what you guys think.

Is there anything you feel he could have done better? He told me to not base my thoughts on the actual contents of the video... but more importantly to emphasize on the editing.

Link to video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DPdIjQ5OIHA

Thanks in advance.

Oh and Go Mavs and Cowboys

[chumdawg]

I thought it was embarrassing.

[Flacolaco]

Buy a tripod, first of all.

And some kind of music track to the whole thing underneath the voice overs would reduce to the tension that I can still feel 10 minutes after watching it.

Is that for...like a class or something?

[Dirkadirkastan]

Too long.

[dirno2000]

I didn't like the gratuitous shot at Tony Romo...let's see that SOB stand in the pocket and face the Giants pass rush.

[alby]

Originally Posted by chumdawg

I thought it was embarrassing.

what part? all of it?

Originally Posted by Flacolaco

Buy a tripod, first of all.

And some kind of music track to the whole thing underneath the voice overs would reduce to the tension that I can still feel 10 minutes after watching it.

Is that for...like a class or something?

It is for Living Direct. www.livingdirect.com

Originally Posted by Dirkadirkastan

Too long.

what parts do you suggest he take out?

Originally Posted by dirno2000

I didn't like the gratuitous shot at Tony Romo...let's see that SOB stand in the pocket and face the Giants pass rush.

Call the fire department, because I am still a flaming romosexual.

[jthig32]

Way too drawn out. Needs to be MUCH more quick hitting/interesting.

[Big Boy Laroux]

also, less douchey.

[alby]

I'll let my buddy know